Document and evaluate the components of the Creative Practice used to make personal visual responses.
Detailed example
Using a journal format, progressively record and evaluate the Creative Practice with photographs, sketches and annotations. For each art form, make photographs, sketches and notes that critically evaluate personal visual responses.
Journal entry
- Date
- Visual responses (pasted in or copies of)
- Artform
- Inspiration
- Observations
- Activity
- Observations
- Personal response
- Developing visual language
- Critical evaluation
Example Journal entries
March 27
Inspiration:
We looked at Hilma af Klint’s work as inspiration. At first, I didn’t understand it and wanted to make a picture that was more realistic, but when we read about the spiritual story in her work, I liked it more.
Observations:
I started to think about what colours have a spiritual connection for me. I love the summer and being on the beach, so I decided to try strong warm colours.
March 30
Paste in visual responses, or copies.
Artform:
Painting (watercolour)
Activity:
Today we made organic shapes using pen on heavy watercolour paper. We played with mixing watercolours in various intensities, and painting these into the organic shapes with soft round brushes.
Observations:
I noticed that if the watercolour was even a tiny bit wet, the colours bled. This could be frustrating if you’re trying to make neat and tidy shapes, or it could be used to achieve an interesting effect, although it would be a bit risky. I noticed that if the watercolour was quite dry on the brush, the brush left marks. I also noticed that the colours dried lighter. The teacher showed us how to use the lid of the watercolour palette to mix and dilute colours, and how to keep a sample swatch of paper to test colours before using them. You can’t really cover up any mistakes or change your mind.
Personal response:
The shapes that I was colouring in were a bit corny, like flowers and leaves, so I made some more sketches where I let my hand move a bit more randomly. This was tricky but I think the resulting shapes are more interesting.
April 5
Paste in visual responses
Activity:
We continued working on the watercolours. I found that I could mix the colours more easily and I’m getting better at using the brush accurately.
Observations:
These actually looked too bold, so my second visual response was softer. I added small areas of blues and greens to contrast with the warm colours.
I noticed that Hilma af Klint often included symmetry in her pictures, so for some of my visual responses I tried to balance the shapes.
Developing visual language:
Thinking about the message I was trying to communicate, the last two visual responses are quite luminous and remind me of the brightest days on the beach. I kept the shapes simple and large in scale, to try to capture the expanse of the air.
Critical evaluation:
There is potential for these visual responses to be developed further. Some of Hilma af Klint’s works were huge, larger than a person, and I’d love to make some massive watercolours on that scale. I’d need to use different materials as I don’t think paper would work that well if it was so big. Also, the brushes would need to be bigger, and I might have to use diluted acrylic paint because watercolours aren’t designed for such big areas.