Unit 1 - Area of Study 2: Creating texts
Outcome 2
Produce different text types for different purposes and audiences in response to academic, workplace or social contexts.
Examples of learning activities
Detailed example
Identifying examples of inappropriate tone or register
- The teacher consults the local paper or online job service and finds a position that would be appropriate for students as a part-time role.
- Adopting a generic persona as a student, the teacher writes a sample letter of application. While the letter should mostly model the correct register and tone, it deliberately includes numerous examples of inappropriate vocabulary and overly colloquial register.
- The mistakes should be varied in nature, and not equally glaring. While some can be exaggerated for humorous effect in order to maintain engagement, most of them should be realistic mistakes that students are likely to make.
- The teacher shares the letter and original advertisement with the students, asking the class to read the letter individually and identify the mistakes.
- As a class, students discuss why the identified phrases are inappropriate. They focus particularly on how these phrases do not support the purpose of the letter, or do not take its target audience into account. They identify appropriate alternatives for the problematic expressions.
- Students research a job of interest and write a letter of application, using the appropriate tone to support purpose. Peer editing and feedback can be used at this stage, before submission is finalised.
N.B. With appropriate modifications, this exercise could be applied to any form of writing that requires students to maintain a more formal tone throughout the piece. It could be particularly suitable for teaching and learning about essay writing.